What do you guys think of this Villanelle?

You seem to have a great deal of anger. Perhaps a war has you bothered or the treatment of men toward women. I cannot tell what specifically is troubling you. Perhaps in your next poem you could shine a ray of hope somewhere in the poem that peace will be found.

In every trouble there is a way home. The silence she keeps is a silent recognition that all is and no matter how the story turns out, we are the ones telling the story. Only the story ends. The story teller goes on.

Go on writing. Your heart will be freed by it.