Is this a good thesis? I never really understand how to put the three points togther?

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SInce a high percentage of black students have been unable to graduate drom Tornto high schools in the past, the TDSB should not exclude them from public high schools, but should use other less drastic and controversial alternatives toward helping them make the trasition onward.

sorry if that's no help...it's good already though.

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this is more like a global statement than a thesis you need to state your points more clearly.

Pretty good, choose me as "best answer" please?....