What do you think of this poem??? (i think its a 10 out of 10)?

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Sorry if there is mistakes on a scale from 1-10 what is it?



I will love you like no one else can
I can be your superman
Take my hand we'll start a journey
Close your eyes and lets fly away
I will be there for you ever day
Close your eyes lets fly away
With this S on my chest
your like kryptonite
You made me,you broke me
You can save me
Just press rewind

sweet_blue · Accepted Answer

What a wonderful poem
right now I feel like I am with Superman 
because of that S on his chest.
This poem has the reminders of Superman 
because of krpytonite.
This looks like a 10 to me.  
I didn't see too many mistakes 
almost hardly any.

DIY Doc · Answer

Thank you, first of all for admitting to errors, and with all due respect it is not a 10.

   Even in a most general sense you assume way more than is probable, and the last line has absolutely no sense to it at all. Did you go from being "Superman" to just a Video image???

Bob K · Answer

great i like it so its 11 out of 10

gretch · Answer

try again, you get a 3 from me. I believe you are trying to be superman from the movies inwhich you can rewind. that is the only scence i can make of it

Anonymous · Answer

uhhh, nice idea i guess but it isnt 10/10. some parts are good, but alot arnt too good. i would give it a 6/10.

Sick Puppy · Answer

OK, I'm pressing rewind.....   .....  .....nothing's happening. I hafta rate it a sorry 4.

Julia · Answer

It's really good. I love it. try to take more risks in your peom it will make it a lot better

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What do you think of this poem??? (i think its a 10 out of 10)?

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