Would you consider this style "The Broken Word"? (5-5-5-5-5-5)?

Question

The sun's hills are hell-
acious but moon
has it's own ridge plan-
etary and warm
with glow holes and cram-
ped circles of light.

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

the second line only has 4 I think..."cious" is only 1...I'll check...
yep!

Always

Edit: PERFECTION!!!

Elysabeth · Answer

No on 'shus'.
If you're going to go with a new form, do not confuse the reader with...uh...is 'slang' or phonetics the right word...I'll go with unusual phonetics in an otherwise phonetically great poem.
I is awake....

Sptfyr · Answer

Yes, I will consider it.

Wow, what an inter-
esting form and verse
to write and intro-
duce to Yahoo bards
who enjoy wonder-
ful new challenges.

Anonymous · Answer

the broken word is still alive
hangin by the number five
the luminous light reflects  night
sparkles from my car under the moon light

Anonymous · Answer

I'm with Regwah on this one. Round and round. LMAO

Semp-listic! · Answer

You are one of the most brilliant poets I've seen.

Anonymous · Answer

i love answering your questions but i dont get it.. just a country bumpkin
:)
i do know acious is pronounced shus like in audacious

Anonymous · Answer

I am not sure I just like reading your poetry Buk!

Elaine P...is for Poetry · Answer

Another new form!  What marvelous imagery!

Anonymous · Answer

This is what I call "Free Form"...not to be confushed with "Free Verse."

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Would you consider this style "The Broken Word"? (5-5-5-5-5-5)?

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