What think you of a 'Bourbon Street' poem?

Doing what you gotta do in the Big Easy...keep off the welfare rolls, don't apologize, ladies of Bourbon St. You are making

lots more than at Popeye's.

This poem had a great twist, and funny too, thought maybe there was a moral behind the poem something like this:

When sharing peanut butter and jelly sandwiches , make sure there's not a boa laying across the back of the chair! There might be more ,to that boa, than meets the eye! Fun Poem Cheers !!!

Bourbon.....bourbon.....

We get that at Hooters.....

But I prefer Corn Whiskey...

Kinda Makes the chicks Friskeee...

Why did the chicken cross the basketball court ?

He heard the referee calling fowls

Why did the turkey cross the road ?

To prove he wasn't chicken

Why did the chicken cross the road, roll in the mud and cross the road again ?

Because he was a dirty double-crosser

Why didn't the chicken skeleton cross the road ?

Because he didn't have enough guts

Why did the chicken cross the playground ?

To get to the other slide

Why did the dinosaur cross the road ?

Because chickens hadn't evolved yet

Why did the turtle cross the road ?

To get to the shell station

Why did the horse cross the road ?

Because the chicken needed a day off

How can you say rabbit without using the letter R?

Bunny.

What's green and dangerous ?

A caterpillar with a machine gun !

Need more Corn Whiskey in maaaa Koffee !!!

See Ya Later......♥♥

I liked it, haha. the rhyme was fun and constistent. "Perhaps he forgot or mabe didn't care either way But most children, they get hungry almost every single day If I coulda done it, I woulda sent him this new news" that sounds awkward and forced. "So when they found your body stinkin' of a bit more'n booze Mama took a drag and shrugged her shoulders at the news." news sounds overused. it gets sorta forced. work on meter.

I really like it! It makes me a little sad though. The sweet innocence of childhood slips away before we know it, and then some girls gotta do what they gotta do to get by.

When you write the children's book, don't in clude this poem,

I wonder at people at times.

But the poem is good I like the twist, peanut butter and jelly

a classic.

I wish I could write poetry! Incredible! For some reason, my friends and I stopped into a strip club when we were in New Orleans. I wondered what the dancer's story was.

Thanks for sharing.

I guess I seen it all now. A children's poem about a stripper. Oh, well, I liked it, I guess the kidlets will too.

I love poetry like this. Its wonderful. I think little ones would enjoy it. You should write your own poetry books for children.

It's got

swing, bling,

walk, talk,

cash, dash,

food, mood,

play, day,

strips, quips,

kids, bids,

voyeurs, enjoyers,

pretend, spend.

Beginning and end.

A neat, street feat!

Something for everyone!

I'll take mine on the rocks if you don't mind....