Who likes the "poem" in my profile??

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Just something I whipped up in 5 minutes...
http://answers.yahoo.com/my/profile;_ylt=ApN4JmIF26MY_X9n9JXfGOTsy6IX;_ylv=3?show=2akebwRVaa&preview=true
this is what it was before:

you are a r o l l e r c o a s t e r  ride
&when it rains your cheeks go ruddier than ever
i can;t help myself at all
i love it when you wear that sweatshirt
&&♥ you are just the boy i hate to love
yeah, your ruddy cheeks and hat backwards
your ♥blue eyes♥
it hurts :(

What do you think of 'em?? Thanks.

Styx_Chick · Accepted Answer

Hmmm...Cute. I think you really captured the moment. I could actually see the scene. Keep em coming!

outlook0330 · Answer

I like them. I really like the rollercoaster/ ruddy cheeks poem.  He must be cute.

Anonymous · Answer

i loveee the first one, it very poetic. the 2nd one is alright, im not as fond of it as the first, but honestly both of them should be like published or something:)

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AqM0MJKa3_d3rt3EAxa2tbTsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20080730204537AATHaMf

April F · Answer

guys often get creeped out by cute girl things like flowers and poems. its a good poem, just make sure you dont come on too strong.

Fall for you · Answer

I don't like them at all.

Why do you have to use the & symbol twice? It's stupid. You're basically saying and and you are just the boy I hate to love.

Why do you say Ruddier? it sounds awkward, just say redder.

kMac · Answer

it sounds like a song.

Jamie K · Answer

i think it's amazing! :)
that's exactly how i feel about my boyfriend...it's almost scary ahaha :) good job, good job!

Anonymous · Answer

good job! those are awesomeee!


http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20080730162933AAptSwo&r=w

Anonymous · Answer

Sure is different.

Katelynne · Answer

AWW.. how sweet.. I think he'll like it!

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Who likes the "poem" in my profile??

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