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Baz .Abroad asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Adult subject matter - Does this count as a poem, what do you think ?

Aw cheers bro, your the best,

No probs sis, you need the rest,

I'll give you some dough, babysitter rates,

Please just go, have fun with your mates.

A pressie for me,

come sit on my knee,

Is it the right size ?,

Try it on we'll see.

Oh wait uncle,

You are silly,

you can't photo yet,

I'm not ready.

There aren't I pretty,

a picture of me,

Come on Uncle,

Hold the camera steady.

Dressie up again,

Uncle your fun,

Do I want to play,

while the others are gone ?

No I'm not special,

but thank you for saying,

Its too hot for clothes,

next to her laying.

I could stay up late,

but mama said,

No no Princess its time for bed,

A story book then Dr. Doolittle.

Please stop it Uncle its starting to tickle.

Wow your cold,

cold as ice,

cuddling close,

grip like vice.

Frozen with fear,

a babies tear,

Please help me god,

a drop of blood.

Now now Angel,

it'll be our secret,

or I'll tell your mother,

and then you'll regret it.

We'll go shopping tomorrow,

get you something nice,

a new mobile phone,

and then maybe an ice.

Princess was great,

no bother at all.

There's some blood on the bed,

where she had a fall.

She woke in the night,

cause she had a fright,

as hot as a roast,

cause she saw a ghost.

I changed her dress too,

we had jello and cream,

she was sick,

it must of been the bad dream.

I told her its our secret,

you know what shes like.

Maybe she can come out tomorrow,

and we'll see the sights.

You know shes getting bigger,

Like you sis a looker,

We'll have fun tomorrow,

and maybe I'll, ..............

treat her to something special.

I write scribblings of all different types, in doing so a contact said that I inspired him to take up the pen again, that was truly a complement. I lost the drive to write, and then there was my contact, I found out the truth and he inspired me to write again.

After all there's no point being a Ghost,

of ones self, how could you live with that ?

Update:

Its entitled Böse Unkel - Bad Uncle.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Yes, a poem. A poem about pedophilia. Adult definitely...you have a vivid imagination, as this could easily be a real story.

  • 1 decade ago

    This has hit home for me.

    I had an uncle just like this one...and your words ring true with how my life was...

    "Please help me God, a drop of blood"....Yes, his fear of being caught, for paedophiles never show remorse and in the end always play the victim, with the real victim forgotten, at least in their mind...to them it is the childs fault for enticing them and tempting them into doing what it is they do....

    The ghost in the middle of the night....The true boogey man and when a child asks are there real monsters in the world, I would have to say yes there are...

    Your words provoke thought and emotion....and for me, memories...the ghosts that come back to haunt...

  • 1 decade ago

    I'm speechless mate.

    My mind is numb.

    My heart wants to cry.

    My hands want to exact revenge.

    Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth.

    Cut out a pound of flesh and see where his blood falls.

  • 1 decade ago

    i never thought of it as pedophilia...though technically, if that was was you were toying with, then there...

    but the real deal is, you have managed so well to sugar coat it, that it's like looking through a stained glass to peer at the darkness within

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  • 1 decade ago

    Hey,I like the way it is written.Very good style and form.Artistic.Don't care for the implied content.Little too pediphile for my tastes.Practice more,you are on the right track.By the way,art doesn't have to please everyone.Dark art is still art.

    Source(s): 40+ years of arts.
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Well written. Depressing subject matter, but still you write real good.

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