What say you poets of this Trigee?

Question

Life /A Garden

Through the change---- like garden variety
life's many swings---moods of colour
Different emotions--- in a Crystal metaphor vase
Dealt with each day--- petals of opportunity
A new challenge ---- presents itself

Posted this earlier only got 2 replys thought of doing it again, thanks for the comments!

Sptfyr · Accepted Answer

This is very good.  I especially like the right side as a poem, but they are all wonderful.  Great overall message too.

Mixtli · Answer

I haven't been answering much lately but I've been reading still, and I remember reading this one.
I can't remember who's answer this was but:

petals=plural
itself=singular

Therefore:

Dealt with each day, . . .petals of opportunity
New challenges . . . present themselves.

I thought was a good suggestion.

Thanks for re-posting.

Anonymous · Answer

That's very lovely; "crystal metaphor vase" is a metaphor itself, for poetry.  Well penned...

Anonymous · Answer

Life is....................................A beautiful arrangement
One with thorns......................But short-lived
We bleed...............................Each day
It's a trial..............................Yet must be held
Close to the heart..................Ever closer
Though it wounds us.............Without remorse.

I hope you really do breed Maltese dogs.  They are so adorable (Andrew got a raw deal).  Bless you sweatheart, you write a lovely poem.

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What say you poets of this Trigee?

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