Will you tell me that story again...?

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Mother

I listen
as remnants
of yesteryear
flicker
In your
greying eyes...

I watch
as a youthful
smile
dances
across your face...

You transcend
time
as I revel
In your tales
 of old
and for that 
moment...

We share 
youthful bliss...


Temari

neonman · Accepted Answer

Temari, this is one of your best.  Succint, pertinent and a great ending.  My compliments.

MZCARTER · Answer

All these idiots must have been beaten as children or had a bad childhood 2 think that this poem was not beautiful...God I hate people...they get more ignorant as the years progress...more proof that this world is coming 2 an end....*ranting* =) This was lovely dear...I'm sure half these fockers can't even write their name...let alone scribe beautiful poetry...

C.S.Scotkin · Answer

Yes indeed Temari, I must second the Neonman!  This is wonderful, and any Mother would love to hear this.  Well done!

vitraux · Answer

To see the child in an old woman's eyes is to understand that life and the scars left by time. May you cherish both ,always.

King of Biscuits · Answer

A story shared to teach, and inspire. Held captive by words, and drawn by life. Lovely.

Anonymous · Answer

Aaawww...
It's beautiful...
-sobs-

mxmazn · Answer

greying eyes with young face? no.

Linda W · Answer

What is the question here?

Anonymous · Answer

Waffles are better than pancakes.

Anonymous · Answer

GTFO Stupid emo *****

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Will you tell me that story again...?

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