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Kev
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This is my comic that im working on, any pointers would be fantastic?

This is the comic i am currently working on with about 5 - 6 lazy writers ( its all good, im a lazy artist ). So far, the story is about a contagion that is released by a corporation during a " test " phase. A bit more on that story when my writers get that far.

This is my first panel:

http://www.geocities.com/lolptik/comicpage1.jpg

Heres one of the first few animals to contract the contagion

http://www.geocities.com/lolptik/undeadbear.jpg

Is my background work too cartoony for my figure work? Any pointers would be great. I know my coloring definitely needs work, and i use adobe photoshop cs3 with a pen tab.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    The dark on the bear are a little too dark, so i cannot really see how maimed its face is.

    Certainly some very dramatic panels

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Your comic looks amazing! Anyway, I think maybe the background is a little simple, but the colours make up for it. Your colouring is gorgeous, btw. But it's hard to say, because I've only seen one page. Keep going, though :)

  • 1 decade ago

    It looks fine so far.

    Just keep working on it.

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