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Care to flow the crazed random river with me?

Wanted to write something for Yahoo Poetry

No matter how I tried nothing would flow with me

So I sit here writing from the top of my head

And everything I've thought is what you just read

Should I turn to the left or turn to the right

Write a song with a G-clef or just call it a night

Those last two lines are a bit of nonsense

Writing about nothing, can nothing be condensed

Can condensed nothing be considered something

quantized particles add up to sum thing

I'm just a bum, sing about the crumbling

Mumbling I stumble, in words I'm tumbling

Spiraling, have you caught on to the craziness yet

Idle mind digesting the trash can diet

Discarded files and deleted prose

Jack Frost dripping at my nose

A rose is a rose, I suppose by any other name

It would be as sweet, is that a trick or treat

There's no pattern, there's no beat

I have defied my own purpose, defied my cause

Now at loss, randomness is my boss

Which way will the wind blow

Does any calculating brain know

No, so I shall drift as in a dream

Only for pastel mists to turn into red hot steam

And awaken with screams from the night

Being unable to wake up from reality is fright

Tell me are you bored, lackadaisical of your trivial pursuit

Then add some more lines, so I can go mute

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  • Mick H
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    I quite like your pandering to this meandering dash

    It gives me a wonderful, tumbleful rush

    Sends me reeling and stealing across this old screen

    With images, sausages, coffee and cream

    With rolex and durex and oodles of stuff

    That pops into my mind as I churn up the guff

    That is lurking and stalking the back of my mind

    And wandering round in a maze that I find

    Quite perplexing and vexing and crazy and weird

    And just as addictive as I originally feared

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    flow the crazed random river with me is excellent writing. don't try so hard and just let your feelings follow that first line. rewrite this expressing how you feel without forcing the rhyme. i'll bet you'll be surprised at how well you do. better a shorter poem with a lot of punch than a long drawn out list of repitition. you have lots of good word play in there, so keep that.

  • ?
    Lv 4
    5 years ago

    Awwwwwwwwwwwww My Sweet sara ( fingers establishing extensive ) I like to embody you GF good enough now seem up inform me who heck is stomping on you wish me to "speak" to them Grabbing baseball bat

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