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just need an opinion, proofread would be appreciated?
I did this for a writing class, but I haven't submitted it in yet. I just wanted to get a few opinions on it. This is nowhere near finished, so anything can be added just in case someone thinks of something else.
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The word gay has two meanings. One, though hardly ever used;, means happy, bright, or flamboyant. The other means a homosexual mean.
As of lately, gay has taken on another meaning. One that I have yet to see in Webster’s Dictionary. It means stupid, disgusting, sometimes ugly. Any derogatory name can be equal to gay.
I hear this on the mouths of my peers multiple times a day. Yesterday, I heard a conversation about a pop quiz. One boy asked how the quiz went. The other boy replied with, “ That crap was mad gay.” What puzzled me was that these boys were within earshot of a teacher. They just kept strolling down the hallways and talking as if nothing offensive was said. These boys were no even chastised by the teacher, just allowed to go on speaking that way.
Gay used a slur, is a homosexual man’s N-Word. Continuously, there are stories about attempt sat getting the N-word banned. Hwy are there no stores for using Gay out of context? Hwy is this slur ignored and accepted in our society?
This willingness to acknowledge the usage of a derogatory form of Gay shows our nation’s unconscious homophobia. We can no longer pretend that gay people aren’t in existence, nor can we act like they don’t have rights. Just because gay people are not of a specific color, does not mean that they aren’t oppressed.
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I got a bit of writer's block at the end, so suggestions would be VERY welcome.
4 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Wow -- I think it's very good! It's very thought-provoking. There are some typos, that I'm sure you'll clean up in subsequent drafts.
One thing that came to my mind when I was reading is this: I once read somewhere that our society is always looking for a scapegoat group of people. This is one of the root causes of racism. If you need more ideas to interject, you might be able to play with that idea and bring it into your paper.
I really like the introduction. I like the way you state that there are two known definitions, and that there is a 3rd one developing. The way you then point out the acceptance of this derogatory slur is really good!
- 1 decade ago
i like it. you could maybe mention how the word retarded is used the same way. " That quiz was retarded." The quiz does not have a mental problem. Gay is a synonym to retarded in this sentence but they are still oftenly used incorrectly.
good luck on the rest and i completely agree with you.
- ?Lv 45 years ago
no longer undesirable =D Few edits; (2d line, 2d sentence; the different ability a gay propose. attempt re-wording, that's slightly awkward) Why, no longer Hwy interior the top of the 2d paragraph And are you advantageous that the be conscious gay can propose flamboyant? i might verify that, yet i'm no longer advantageous. whether that's somewhat properly and creatively written =D