Have you ever ventured off beat?

This is vintage Semper. Strong message and beat, no awkward words. Play another one when you wake up!

Brilliant....I can certainly feel the rhythm and the beat on this one. I am sure we all have days when we feel we are "off beat"....I know I certainly do. I would only add that as far as I am concerned, I hope I would never "sing off key" in a *literal* sense (with 20 years of experience and the wonderful musical gifts I have been given, I think that by now I can always carry a tune in the correct key).....although I am sure I do from time to time in a metaphorical sense....and I know we are talking metaphorically here.

Nice work.

This truly has a pleasing beat - keeps one involved and the feet start tapping. Could visualize a marching military drill team. This would certainly add class to any rap arrangement. I'll be "tapping" to this all day - thanks and well done.

Read a first class rap

Was hard to beat

With a statifying rhythm

For dancing feet ♥

You got a knack for the yak

You got Sempa Fi

You got mine anyway

and me to a T

When the sun comes up

and the beat goes down

I'm wishing for the day

when I'm not the ***king clown

Another day goes

and my head hits the bed

Another day comes

And it goes like I said.

Played in a marching band that did military style marching--kind of know what you mean.

Yes I have always marched "to the tune of a different drummer" but that is a good thing, Right?!

This one is a keeper as always. I do hear the music in the background and the 'offbeat' sounds great!

nice write------

Ma, thinking of you and mentioning you in my prayers-kk!

I live most of my life off beat! Lol.

Loved the poem. Wonderful as always.

Cheers.

Off beat-- not with music

but with life

Nice

For three days, I've been off beat, too..

but unlike you, I haven't a clue what to do!

Ahrhythmia

Eerily quiet

darkness engulfs

stilled heart

waits...

waits for

shallow pulse

listens...

listens for

belated beat's

promised

return.

Wooooo Hoooooo!! Let's go dancing!! Good one nice beat !!1

This beat is good

and makes a lot

of sense,

what doesn't

is, as one ages

it happens

more often.