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More HD Love Poetry. Comments?
She comes into my life with beauty and kindness
One who gives love and forgives my thoughtlessness
All others fade into the distance
My horizon is filled with only her essence.
Dreams awaken, hope doth arise again
Life's desperate journey combines in her touch
The realization occurs, with no hesitation
All things are possible amidst her faith.
Though the spirit at times be soakingly dampened
Or put to the fire from man's nature sharpened
Her Sun contains the power to spur on this soul
To dry out the Black Dog, put flame to desire.
Is blessedness deigned upon all who live?
Can fortune's favor be so randomly spread?
Banish the questions! Think not so much more!
I accept God's gift
Forever
Your love
This pome needs a title. I prefer short pithy titles, preferably using a word or phrase in the verse. Just can't seem to get one here.
"My Fortune." NAY!
"She." I thought of this. This is what the poem is all about. A nice plain simple pronoun.
"Hope Doth Rise Again." Hmmmm......interesting. Maybe just "Hope". The turning point of the poem.
7 Answers
- -Lv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
It was sheer beauty, I thought!
I tend to go for the short, hit with a punch type stuff,
but I found it very lyrical and tremendously romantic.
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- ?Lv 71 decade ago
She sounds like a person who chooses sadness over anger
Perhaps from wisdom gained
Chooses Faith over hope and acceptance over criticisms
I would not call the poem Hope because "I believe" hope is for people without Faith.
Having said that, may I suggest, Amidst Her Faith, I Let Her Be
This poem is........all about Faith Ice
The beauty that is found in God's Grace
No, blessedness is not.
No, it is not random.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Hmm. I thought HD meant Hilda Doolittle for a moment.
Okay, well....
"My Fortune."
"She."
"Hope Doth Rise Again." (Ding, ding!)
Love this poem...it will stick with me tonight.
- ErikaLv 45 years ago
exciting the kind you chosen to concentration on the words Emotion, solar, reality, Union, We.... You used slightly inner rhyme, alliteration even a dash of assonance. And it is not 'over the counter' Hallmark. good.
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
"My Sun"......I think it is an appropriate title. You said, "Her Sun contains the power to spur on this soul"...meaning YOUR soul....speaking in the first person....MY Sun...
I like the poem, it's great!
