Need feedback on my Valentines Day poem?

Excellent prose!

Good use of the words Hamburger Helper

I'd hire you to write my greeting cards.

I feel your pain, I have 3 stinky dogs for my valentines day. Look at the bright side you can share banana cream pie, with your monkey and roast hot dogs and marshmallows with your dragon., these's a silver lining under all the bs, if you dig deep enough

You mean Teo doesn't like Hamburger Helper?

Going to a cocktail party..hoping to eat enough there so Michael doesn;t have to send out for more pizza delivered to his wine cellar...you gonna' be there?

aww The same here to on this lonely * Valentines day.Lovey poem*

Ya A nice cup of soup is all I will be sharing tonight with my kids.have been alone for many years way to long

awww. Happy and sad at the same time. You need to make sure you have some chocolate when your done. No sharing with the chocolate either. GOtta invite your best friend. If not you can become cold and callused like me.

I loved it!

You and yourself will celebrate Valentine's Day. Me too, except my shared meal with myself is teriyaki chicken. Enjoy your day.

Love yourself; all of us should. And by the way, it's just a commercialized day. Loving people live every day as though it's Valentine's day.

I Like it Fro!

Wish you could come share a night out on the town...wouldn't that be fun?! Sending you a big HUG

I think it's the best poem ever, or pretty close to it! Not only do you keep a fastidious home, along with being a fantastic baker, you're a poet!

Do you mind if I claim that as my Valentines Day poem too? Lets have a cyber dinner together tonight, that way we won't be alone.

Happy Valentines Day to "us"!

**hugs**

<3 Happy Valentines Day, Great poem. I'll be ordering pizza... or should I?