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A poem called "Love Unspent"...comments?
she was a vision standing over me
offering soft hand with long, thin fingers
in angelic voice she said
come away with me, I'll take you there
(no, I'm not ready to go)
a smile crossed her radiant face
and she took my hand in hers
yes, that's the hardest part, I know,
leaving before all your love's been spent
(true, my dying heart is still full)
ah, but that's why I've come for you
to share of a place to spend that love
where you can pour it out from up above
over all those you want for eternity
(promise?)
trust me, you always have
come away with me.....
....now
(show me this place)
Mixtli: I borrowed it from you...hope you don't mind!!
(Why someone comes to a post only to thumbs down every answer is beyond me, really)
22 Answers
- ?Lv 61 decade agoFavorite Answer
Perfect outlook, Ma (I like the parenthoughtsis).
When it is time--let it rain.
- 1 decade ago
As I close my eyes
I can see your face
a hundred-thousand times.
I can hear in your voice
the gentleness
as you call me to your side.
As painful though as it may be
to live in the dreams of yesterday -
I will not forget you.
©2000 Beansâ¢
And Yet again ....
Wishing you were here to talk -
wishing I could see you,
wishing I could say hello -
wishing I was near you.
Wishing I could see you smile,
wishing I could hear you laugh -
Wishing I could have all those things
that I no longer have.
©2000 Beansâ¢
As always, a good poem Ma⢠One is never truly gone if he/she lives on in the memory of others. It is in their fond rememberance that we continue to have life, at least for a while. This poem makes me think, a lot. Imagery is melancholic for me ... the One of my (poor in comparison) poems is long gone ... But you my friend, have to stay put for a long while yet ... because I said so. ;)
xoxo â¥
Source(s): *edit* I feel left out! *cries* ... I seem to have missed the thumbsdowing spoil sport! xo - DondiLv 71 decade ago
This has a quality I don't see much in un-metered non-rhyming verse. It sings, the words flow to create a music setting in my mind, so that as I read, the words are musical notes to a classic symphony hereto unknown to mankind. I like what it says, but more so, I like the sound of it. That is why I read aloud. It sounds different that way.
Thank you for posting this one.
- MizzyLv 71 decade ago
wonderful....
and no cost for the
streets and gates
love spent just
continues on
love isn't always circle
it is a continuous line
crossing, meeting
connecting
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
Awe inspiring piece on peace and solitude!! VERY NICE WRITE!!
- Anonymous1 decade ago
wow you blew me away! I love it! normally I have critique or something more to say about a poem, but there really is nothing else I can say!
â¥--poet360
- ttteo0328Lv 61 decade ago
Wonderful,ma;
You are`t going anywhere.
You are here to stay,
to shower your unspent love
to each and everyone.
- 1 decade ago
This speaks loudly, yet ever so softly of what we have to look forward to.
Very enjoyable moring read.
Thanks, Ma!
