Song I wrote what do you think?

Ancient’s Eyes Ripped Into The Heart

I think... I want to be forgiven. Hmmm. More than anything

Good friend why have you forsaken me

Killing my sleep never letting me forget

Haunting my memories as you died in my arms

I let you die I let you die

Please forgive me as I call out to you

Take this pain away Take away the memories

this malevolent curse Take it all away

Stabbed in the back you were ripped away from me

I walk this land alone the black sheep

Tattered and Torn I tried to push on

I tried to fight this all away But you still reside inside of me

Forgive me Forgive me

Please forgive me as I call out to you

Take this pain away Take away the memories

this malevolent curse Take it all away

I can’t forgive myself

I never blamed you. Not once. You came for me. That's all that matters.

It is a Metal song with changing of regular singing to high pitched screams to low growls