idk if this is a good poem?

You have great visual impact, but at about line four I wondered where it was going - if there would be a reason that I felt dipped in chocolate and whipped cream -- which is a good feeling.

I'll watch for more of your yummy poems..... t

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a few editorial remarks -- spelling and verb tense:

Chocolate kisses and ice cream wishes.

Lemon drops and soda pops.

Jelly beans and sugar filled dreams.

Lollipops and candy shops

Candystixs and choclate twixs

It's a creamy dreamy rich kind of feeling <--------

and that's why I've got to keep on dreaming <----------

It's the shortcuts from texting that can catch you when you write poetry for boards like this one.

One of the easiest misspelling is felling (felling a tree, making it fall) instead of feeling.

Itz is not a word; thats should be that's (because you are writing, in essence that is); I've instead of i -- gives it the correct tense.

Hahaha, I like it! That's good! Makes me want to go eat some candy right now!!

haha thats sweet!

[pun intended ;]

™Hmn...well for me it do sounds pretty good^^

...It makes me hungry and crave for sweets...

..GoodLuck for your poem

...God Speed

yummmy i'm hungry

it's nice, good job

ummmmmm . . .

duh?

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oh, OH-OOOOOOh!

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FEELING!

, maybe, now I get it!

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cool

maybe found somewhere else, but works the tongue with images.

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yum.