Love is Blind.. a poem... please edicate..?

Yeah no rhyming scheme but that's alright, not all poems must do so. I think that the message is pretty hot, where you are really evaluating one's face and features. His lips, eyes, odour, nose, bodies, breath all such wonderful imagery! Not bad at all!

The thing with this poem, other than it's beautiful, is that you do rhyme in some parts but not in others. I think that it would be better if you didn't rhyme at all or you completely rhymed. One or the other. I know that's hard when a poet is just throwing thoughts out because a lot of times rhyming is how a poet thinks.

Very sensual poem. Could use some more imagery so we can see what you see but not too much (ha ha)

Great job.

Oh I think this is rather good. You do well with this, it sings.

<I seem to really love it when you toss words about like this!>

I think you're on a roll today Maddam.

A lovely piece... So this is the theme for today...

Yes indeed, a roll, perhaps in the hay !!!!!

I love you silm#

no no no its very good actually. i like it alot. :-) the ending is great.

very nice and soft.

eloquent and hot!