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Does this Poem say enough?

Hello Everyone.. :)

Does this Poem say enough?

A Love That Never Was

As I ponder on the why’s and why nots

I must look beyond, at what I think I have lost

One day at a time, I shall take for a brand new start

Only Goodness and Grace as I leave, Do I want to impart

My heart still grieves, for what might have been

Though he tried, he could not find any ~Love~ within

I’ll take the time to stop and reminisce if but for awhile

That what most I will miss, is his laughter and smile

If it were right, he would have able to shown his heart to me

That is something he cannot, so it is time to let him be free

I want us to part ways without any anger or hate

As I look back, I can see it was our fate

You may ask me if I have any regrets

It just is hard to fathom, we will no longer be a duet

I want us to stay “Friends” and keep in touch

Having known him nine years, I will miss him very much

Though some may say we have lost at ~Love~

When I think of him, I will Thank God in Heaven above

((((((( HUGS )))))))

With ~Love~ In Christ.. :)

Update:

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Update 2:

((((((( Paulz )))))))

Update 3:

((((((( Faith In God )))))))

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Yes it is a wonderful poem!!!

    Unfortunatly someone I love and who is very close to me is going through this situation your poem speaks of. I hurt for her, I cry for her and I pray for her.

    Source(s): Faith In God
  • 1 decade ago

    It is a very sweet poem. Shows a lot of emotion and tenderness.

  • 1 decade ago

    i think you poem is great i would say it was written with feeling. just wish i was able to do the same. i have tried but am afraid was never one of my strong points.

    well done

    paulz

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