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Arrrrrrggghhh!! Poets, dig down deep. Breathe slowly ... Can you even stand it?
Another Day
I find what you have written here to be very interesting.
You have written from the heart
and with some style.
You have told a story
and painted a picture with your words.
You have brought to mind things
And the thoughts of things,
And the very thing of thought itself.
You have entertained me, in a way.
I would have read your piece of my own choosing.
In your writing, you depict people,
and I can believe in them.
The cry and laugh, and other things happen.
You are quick to point out the irony.
You float glibly across our sensibilities,
while prodding us to think the more.
But most of all, you have a gift,
Which you have given us here,
That is, yourself,
Which is, of course, most pleasing.
And I can see that you are a moral person,
But you avoid trouncing us with your morality.
A light touch, you question more than answer
And leave it to us to decide for ourselves.
You almost speak a voice universal,
one we all can feel,
if only we could express it,
and a feeling of the yearning to reach farther,
to see what is on the other side,
and perhaps, just for an instant,
to touch it.
And in all these senses,
You have written a very interesting work.
Your audience would applaud you
for your artistry.
And it is therefore with much chagrin
that I must tell you
that, with regard to the publication of your poem,
it surely will be published
and be read, with much appreciation.
And while we are pleased that you would contact our establishment,
we are not in a position
to take on your project
at this time.
I therefore find myself forced to offer you
This perhaps small consolation,
That there will be, indeed
Another day
Very sincerely yours
What?What?What?
Publishers & Bookiers
New York, NY
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5 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Is this what is called a "easy letdown". Just reading the whole thing - starts to get ones hopes up. At the end - one can not believe - what it reads - could be the outcome. The delivery was sooo beautiful - drat - and all other words that may apply. Anyway - the speakers words - are more than welcome here. Well done - bravo!! ♥
- GrannyjillLv 71 decade ago
I've never submitted poetry to a 'real' publisher but..I can imagine the disappointment which rejection brings, especially when I know (as you do) that the decision of whether to publish or not publish is not based on merit. It is often based on past success by an established poet or the fact that the writer is already famous in some other sphere (A Book of Poetry by ....supply any name of a current show-biz personality or royal personage)
Keep on plugging away Usaf, you'll get there in the end.
- ?Lv 45 years ago
Well, once I get past all the rocks and more rocks, and poor innocent earthworms (the myth about if you chop them in half that they'll become 2 and regenerate -- it is myth. they die. I also learned earthworms are not native to NA -- am a gardener) I find more rocks, bigger ones -- boulders -- encompassed by clay, old rusty hangers and obsolete soda bottles and ... well you get the drift. Once in awhile I hit an irrigation pipe -- not good, trust me. And believe it or not, beyond all this metaphorical is ... true substance. Life and it's lessons ... gotta love 'em.
- ?Lv 61 decade ago
Wow! Great writing. I appreciate you! Thank you for sharing your talent. God bless.
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
rarely do I answer the door