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Do flowers always bloom?

Thorns

______

No design or plan

for this garden

a seed

recklessly sown

Sprouting up

through rock

strangled by

weeds

Stretching

reaching

to grasp

sun's light

warmth

Dying of thirst

begging for rain

Nourish me

A cactus will

bloom

in the desert

But she

was a

Rose

(Thank you, Dave.x.)

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Maybe the cactus is pretty enough, for now?

    Excellent poem.

    The last three lines.....sweet!

  • Anonymous
    5 years ago

    Wow. This seems at first a little difficult. But I'll give it a try. Love isn't always in full bloom, nor does this indicate one thing or another. Love is constantly evolving; it's just as beautiful when green, before budding, & after full bloom, as it goes through the natural process, retains its beauty. But--a flower that withers. Was it weak at the start? Was it well nourished? All things loved must be tended; when neglected, they are difficult to revive. Perhaps the flower was never intended to bloom--for anyone? Why would love wither from "temptation"?

  • Daisy
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    A question bloomed into an answer and a poem was born. And cactus have their own sweet beauty.

  • 1 decade ago

    Nice job, Cactus Flower.

     :-)

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  • 1 decade ago

    I have missed you. This is excellent. Well written, smooth flow and packs a punch!

    Love all of it, the closer is fantastic!

    But, she IS a rose...

  • 1 decade ago

    For simple, minimal words, this speaks much. The last two stanzas close this well. An excellent write.

  • -
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    I KNEW I would find this from you this morning....Dave's encouragement is very powerful, no?

    Beautiful poem, no thorns to be found in it!

    And look, Mek's back, too!!

    ma

  • JC
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    A rose by any name, really does smell as sweet...and linger.

    It's good to see you writing again Bluebelle. :)

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Prick

    SteveC

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    a Rose was read

    bloomed from

    a Rose

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