What do you think of these names?

You don't need to do parenthesis and then more parenthesis.

The first names are fairly horrific. Eliza, Jane, May, Michelle and Anne are quite nice, but they don't really do much for me.

I know it's only a story, but still. The names are just a little too weird for me. I like names in a story to be believable, and I don't feel these are.

Eliza, Jane, Abigail, Michelle, May, Phyllis, and Anne are perfectly fine names to use for a story, your other ones are very... unique. But, I suppose it depends on the type of story you are writing. If it is some sort of fantasy, then the names would be fine, I suppose. On the other hand, if it is just a regular story, please choose normal names for your characters. Most people probably wouldn't appreciate a name like Catr, Christmas, Friday, etc. in a regular story.

Just some thoughts to take into consideration.

Sorry, I dont like them. They dont have to be that unique. I mean, Catr, Friday, Christmas, and Artelia, No NORMAL person would name their kid any of those names, even if its a story.

Honestly I ve never seen such a horrible list. Good thing this is just a story!

I hope it's a fantasy, because those names sound ridiculous.

They sound too much like a calender.

are they supposed to have weird names?