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What is your opinion on this poem?
I did this as a kind of exercise for a thing I'm writing. It's from the point of view of one of my characters. Let me know what you think, and what you might expect the character to be like. ;)
Keep the ice around my body
Don't let the cold shell break
Feed me the poison of your smile
Don't let me know it's fake
Kill me slowly, I am willing
Just keep me iced and numb
Don't let me feel the pain of living
Drug me up till I succumb
Eat the soul I haven't got
I've nothing left to give
Just promise me you'll let me die
So I don't have to live
6 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Sounds like song lyrics :)
I can definitely feel the speaker's pain in this. But it also seems as though the speaker enjoys the pain. Just my opinion...
Keep writing!
- Anonymous1 decade ago
A+ 100% its awesome
- Anonymous1 decade ago
It's too morbid for my taste.
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
I have no clue what it's about, but it's not bad.
