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You'd think that people would have had enough of silly sad poems?
Are sad poems as prevalent in poetry as love songs are in music?
Well I for one have had enough! Let's get happy people! If only for a little while.... What do you think of my poem?
Ipanema….
The name alone
puts a Jobim bounce in my step
The boardwalk’s alive
but no see no hot papis yet
The pink thong bikini
is an invitation to stare
But the only accepts
are flabby men with too much hair
No matter, no matter
I enjoy their warm pervy grins
And how the sun’s juicy lips
leaves lipstick sweat on my skin
And how my Skol’s crispy taste
brings out the beach’s fuzzy glow
Like the sunshine on the ocean
swimming in the tide’s ebb and flow
Brazil! Brazil! I love Brazil!
Capoeira on sand
Havaianas on feet
Bronze on body
Romance on tongue
I’m melting! I’m melting! From the bliss of it all!
I’ll be a puddle for sure
if I live here for good
Better get back on the plane
And stay solid in the States
I probably should have stayed with the same form throughout, but I just got too excited, I couldn't help but break out of it!!! Is that forgiveable?
6 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
See how they run
Camouflaged Planet
Blocked by the Sun
Whippin Post
Holy Goast
Muffin Toast
axe kick
broke .....
nevermind, sick
Yours is better.
Source(s): You just keep woopin my axe. Just left a little poem no big task. It was at the my answer for the last. It wasn't about nothin A little brain puffin About a muffin. - DaphneLv 45 years ago
Try to use structure in your poems so they are better. Like: The princess and her prince" She wanders alone in the night, Wishing to find her handsome prince, She searches for hours but he is nowhere in sight, She longs to get her true loves kiss, She runs through the trees, She explores the beach, He isnt in his castle so where could he be? Maybe he is too far out of reach, Sad and hurt she goes back home. Great poems, I would say it is a 10/10.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
No no, it was absolutely riveting. I'm excited now too! Haha. I want to go some place hot with hot bodies and sweat and music and romance and tongues.
Thank you!
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
Waltzing Matilda is better any day, hands down.