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poisonapple6l3 asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

CAn you tell me what you think of my poem?

Here Today, Gone Today

i need some help

i dont know who to turn to

i need to find a way

or it will be the end

im here today

i must confess

im falling apart

and i need someone to come and hold my hand

i feel like a little girl

in need of love

im here today

you dont listen

you think everythings ok

well can you hear me cry

i have reach the end

im here today

gone today

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  • Awkward
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
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    : )

    i'll hold your hand : )

    sometimes we begin a day happy and end it depressed...things can slip through our hands so easily...

    a thoughful write

    but pay attention to your "i"s

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