Critiques, comments, grunts, groans...?

Really nice.

Only suggestion is change the title so that the microphone reveal comes across as a surprise.

I liked this a lot.

Best,

Todd

Excellent. I never do this but I'd leave the title off so we don't see what's coming. This is so good.

Side note: Sit on the piano in a tight dress and heels and you won't be quite so much at the mercy of the mic. Works for me. x.

Edit: You realize that can be taken two different ways. Just how good DO you look in a dress? hehehe

I'm with Bluebelle - do the Michelle Pfeiffer piano lounging from The Fabulous Baker Boys.

Yes the element of surprise is reduced by the title.

Call it "I gotta hand it to ya" or something...

I tried to address the poem itself

but am stuck with the image

of you...in a tutu

At first, I thought you were talking about your wife. Good one. Semper.

Ha, Ha, you got me, very clever, last line a great surprise.

I like this one a lot.

It's nice to come back and read your work.

Very nice:)

clever, l like words that may surprise

we all want an audience

at some point

we want them to go

something to do with your reach?