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New poem: Hourglass, thoughts?
Hourglass
Been fighting the hourglass
Its sands flowing too slowly for me
For it seems that I’m stuck in the past
With all of your beautiful memories
I smile with sun
But I cry with the moon
I can put on a good front
But I’m still not over you
Even though, I know you’re gone
Even though it’s made me strong
I can’t deny, it’s you I want
To hold between my arms.
Been fighting the hourglass
Its sands flowing too slowly for me
I just want to forget the past
And all of your beautiful memories
3 Answers
- RossJuliaLv 41 decade agoFavorite Answer
Beautifully said. It rhyme and that makes it beautiful. So maybe you find yourself an angel and maybe you will want the sands to flow even slower hahaha....
- 1 decade ago
I think it's really good. I like the repetition in the first and last stanzas.
- 1 decade ago
i very much enjoyed that poem, it waz very beautiful, and i 2 loved the way your beginning shadowed the end, it waz wonderful
