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LGBT: What Do You Think Of My Story? Can I Get Some Constructive Criticism?
I wrote it a long time ago and only now came back and re-read it . . .part of me still likes it, and part of me thinks it's far too melodramatic and obviously too rushed and lacking a "real" story; it's more of an intro, I guess.
Still, I'm curious as to your thoughts!
Gaydar: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id...
(No worries about the site; it's not sexual).
E-Tard: I know, while re-reading it, I was like "Dang, why did I go so heavy on the F-word? I mean, I have no problem using it, and I think it has great shock value, but I totally agree that a couple of them need to be taken out.
oh well whatever nevermind: well, the site itself is for sexual/erotic stories, and I have those posted as well, but the one I linked to is non-erotic.
7 Answers
- E_TardLv 61 decade agoFavorite Answer
Wow....I'm impressed!
Constructive criticism - you used the word, "fag" a lot. Was it for shock effect? I enjoyed reading your work - thanks.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Personally I like the use of the f-word I found it comforting and alluring, I mean I thought that its use was putting out some kind ov... like harsh message/imprint to the world and I applaud its use since ppl must realize that there is so much more to being gay for both males/females than just same sex f**king!
At first I wuz a bit skeptical..... I really thought it wuz going 2 b one ov those documentary types stuff.... but with each new word I became more and more enthralled with the guy and his gaydar powers. I like that his patner in crime is not a guy bcuz that would be 2 predictable and typical. I mean there is no use to write something that will enforce IDIOTIC stereotypes. I think u r very talented and creative as this is the type iof literature that I hv bin dying to read. Even if you decide to make it a little less dramatic ( :-( sigh) please dont go to far with it cuz I LOVE LOVE it as is.
Source(s): can i b ur fan... lol - 1 decade ago
sorry this site it completely blocked in my place.. i would love to have read it...
- 1 decade ago
*******!
go bang each other instead of putting these gay posts up..
*******....
you's don't know what you's a missing.....
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
Your really good..
