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Do You Like My New Country Song?

Before I post the lyrics I just want to say I'm sorry for going inactive on you guys. -sorry.

ARTIST: JON MALCOM

TITLE: GIVE ME FIVE

I feel like crying

But I know it won’t help

I know my hearts breaking

And I’m going through hell

Before you slam that door and walk out my life

Remember walking out aint always the best thing to try

Maybe for a second put yourself in my shoes

Start thinking of me and stop thinking of you

I know sometimes I make you cry

Please understand, I’m just a guy

Some of what you said really hurt me bad

The yelling and the tears there aint much more to add

But I wish I could go back in time

I’m begging you please just give me five

I’d try to not say everything I said

And everything else God forbid

I’m sorry

When this day started it didn’t start like this

You woke up beside me and you gave me a kiss

But like everything else in this world

Problems close in on a boy and a girl

But I wish I could go back in time

I’m begging you please just give me five

I’d try to not say everything I said

And everything else God forbid

Baby-I’m sorry

There’s twenty-four hours in one day

Everything goes wrong in twenty-four ways

All I’m asking is just five

Save our love and save my life

But I wish I could go back in time

I’m begging you please just give me five

I’d try to not say everything I said

And everything else God forbid

Baby-I’m sorry

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    I really like the lyrics. This is the same fight I always have with my husband. Every time we argue it always comes back to if he would have just said he was sorry, it would have ended the fight and not gone to the point where I may end up crying.

    I would love to hear what the tune is. Some times just the tune will make a song even if it has so-so lyrics. Maybe you can sing this song and post it on U-tube or something, and then put a link onto yahoo answers. Who knows you may end up like Taylor Swift!

    Source(s): Country music fan!
  • 1 decade ago

    i think it has really good lyrics and good meaning. you have talent but for some reason it doesn't have the country feel. maybe you could change something to make it more country. to me it sounds more like the wanna be country not the actual country but that could be what you want i really don't know. but you are an amazing writer and you do have talent but it just doesn't have the real country feel to me.

  • DAKal
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    The lyrics are alright, but you should have something about hound dogs in it. I like long eared hound dogs. Oh.....and mention a truck too!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Reading it doesn't tell me nothing .I have to listen to it to give you an opinion whether I like it or not ...Sorry ..

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  • 1 decade ago

    yes! yeah! && yuppers...lol ♥

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Farts in the wind...

    All we are is farts in the wind...

  • 1 decade ago

    i agree i love pillows...why did you ask??

    Source(s): yo momma
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