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Do You Like My New Country Song?
Before I post the lyrics I just want to say I'm sorry for going inactive on you guys. -sorry.
ARTIST: JON MALCOM
TITLE: GIVE ME FIVE
I feel like crying
But I know it won’t help
I know my hearts breaking
And I’m going through hell
Before you slam that door and walk out my life
Remember walking out aint always the best thing to try
Maybe for a second put yourself in my shoes
Start thinking of me and stop thinking of you
I know sometimes I make you cry
Please understand, I’m just a guy
Some of what you said really hurt me bad
The yelling and the tears there aint much more to add
But I wish I could go back in time
I’m begging you please just give me five
I’d try to not say everything I said
And everything else God forbid
I’m sorry
When this day started it didn’t start like this
You woke up beside me and you gave me a kiss
But like everything else in this world
Problems close in on a boy and a girl
But I wish I could go back in time
I’m begging you please just give me five
I’d try to not say everything I said
And everything else God forbid
Baby-I’m sorry
There’s twenty-four hours in one day
Everything goes wrong in twenty-four ways
All I’m asking is just five
Save our love and save my life
But I wish I could go back in time
I’m begging you please just give me five
I’d try to not say everything I said
And everything else God forbid
Baby-I’m sorry
7 Answers
- joy_gone_wildLv 51 decade agoFavorite Answer
I really like the lyrics. This is the same fight I always have with my husband. Every time we argue it always comes back to if he would have just said he was sorry, it would have ended the fight and not gone to the point where I may end up crying.
I would love to hear what the tune is. Some times just the tune will make a song even if it has so-so lyrics. Maybe you can sing this song and post it on U-tube or something, and then put a link onto yahoo answers. Who knows you may end up like Taylor Swift!
Source(s): Country music fan! - 1 decade ago
i think it has really good lyrics and good meaning. you have talent but for some reason it doesn't have the country feel. maybe you could change something to make it more country. to me it sounds more like the wanna be country not the actual country but that could be what you want i really don't know. but you are an amazing writer and you do have talent but it just doesn't have the real country feel to me.
- DAKalLv 51 decade ago
The lyrics are alright, but you should have something about hound dogs in it. I like long eared hound dogs. Oh.....and mention a truck too!
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Reading it doesn't tell me nothing .I have to listen to it to give you an opinion whether I like it or not ...Sorry ..
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
Farts in the wind...
All we are is farts in the wind...