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barbie
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barbie asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

what do you think of this poem?

Here I Am

You think I'm gone cause you don't see me anymore.

I'm right here beside you, just like I was before.

I touch your face and brush your hand while you lay sleeping.

Do you know it's me, or are you simply dreaming?

I'm the bird that flutters by and the rainbow high above you.

I'm the pretty flowers standing in the field.

I'm the whisper of the breeze and the raindrops on your window.

Do you see me? Do you hear me? Yes, I'm real.

I am all around you, just look and you will see,

I'm not really gone from you at all.

Call my name and I'm beside you, to help and love and guide you, cause I am still your mother after all.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Lovely...very lovely.

    I love the part about the bird fluttering and the Rainbow the most.

    It sounds like someone has tragically lost their mother and that person feels they are lost to because she is no longer there. but the mother's spirit still abides with them...and the mother shows that by this poem

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    APPLAUDS!

    Superb. I haven't read a cuter poem then this in the past few months.

    I'm gonna keep this with me. Thanks a lot for sharing this. This poem is a bundle of joy.

    I hope to see more of your work.

    A star for your adorable poem.

    God bless~

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