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What do you think of this poem? (I know, another one...)?
Distraught in daydreams
My consciousness streams
Wondering where to go from here-
I’m basking in future’s hope
While drowning in my fear
Of life alone or love not true
Or what I hope to do.
Will I know you when you’re found?
Will love be a rescue rope
When I am nearly drowned
In tears from dreams
Where reality seems
As real as you or I
And when I wake alone
I feel like I could die
But for hopes held dear-
That you’ll find me here,
Waiting for your heart?
In patience I will firmly cope
Until your love does start.
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bq: needs a title.
Found sounds positive and hopeful... and if "that's what it was," that's what it shall be. ;-)
2 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
this is really nice. :) coming from another writer. as i read it, the name "found" came to mind, but that's just my first instinct. i've learned to go with it, so that's what it was. :)
- 1 decade ago
I give it an A plus. Very well written. How about using Until your love does start? Or Just Your love?