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Falcon_01 asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

What do you think of this poem? (I know, another one...)?

Distraught in daydreams

My consciousness streams

Wondering where to go from here-

I’m basking in future’s hope

While drowning in my fear

Of life alone or love not true

Or what I hope to do.

Will I know you when you’re found?

Will love be a rescue rope

When I am nearly drowned

In tears from dreams

Where reality seems

As real as you or I

And when I wake alone

I feel like I could die

But for hopes held dear-

That you’ll find me here,

Waiting for your heart?

In patience I will firmly cope

Until your love does start.

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bq: needs a title.

Update:

Found sounds positive and hopeful... and if "that's what it was," that's what it shall be. ;-)

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    this is really nice. :) coming from another writer. as i read it, the name "found" came to mind, but that's just my first instinct. i've learned to go with it, so that's what it was. :)

  • 1 decade ago

    I give it an A plus. Very well written. How about using Until your love does start? Or Just Your love?

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