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April
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April asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

what do you think of my poem?

crushed love-

why do i fall for some one that doesnt care

why do i want someone who's love isnt there?

i hate myself for liking you

i feel so sad and blue

i want u more then anything

you only like me as a friend

and i feel so heart broken

these tears never seem to end

as my love continues to go unspoken

i hate having this feeling

of being inlove

of wanting to be your only one

if only you could see how badly i want it

u dont understand how much i love you

if only u knew

if u only knew how much

that i'd do anything for your touch

i wish i never felt this way

then i would be okay

i cry all night wishing you felt the same

why does this love cause such pain?

tears stream down my face

i feel like going insane

knowing that where not together

wanting to be with u forever

its just a pain that overwhelms me

im just so frustrated and angry

i hate falling in love

being in pain is not what i call fun

why do we have to fall in love?

to go from floating in the clouds above

to being crushed like a soda can

to go from being warmed by the sun

to becoming bitter cold by that someone

this love is tearin up my heart

i cant take it anymore of this

longing to have your kiss

i need to stop before i go crazy

well no more tears am i going to shed

no more heartache and no more dread

im going to lock away my heart

and toss the key very far

if i keep my heart closed then i wont get hurt

better to be safe then to get burned

no more worrying about love

i had enough

love is a stupid lie

im just going to say goodbye

to all my silly dreams

i guess its just not meant to be

im never going to find a soul mate

im sick of having to wait

for something that will never come

there isnt such thing as true love

im not going to look anymore

no more love i say as i close the door

love sucks

and i had enough

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    This is a great poem. I know pretty much everyone has felt this way about someone at least once in their lifetime. You put it into the perfect words.

  • 5 years ago

    For me a poem has to have rhythm. It doesn't necessarily have to rhyme but it needs to hit my emotions. I think clarity of expression is important as well. I don't like to second guess what I'm reading about. I always look for what I term "poetic gems"in the text.

  • 1 decade ago

    My motto is seek and ye shall find. If you give up on love you will be cheatingg yourself out of a lifetime of wonder. Each individuall is a universe of exciting possibilities. Dig deep in the cracker jack box you will find a prize.

    Source(s): I have loved well and deeply-it sometimes was painful but well worth the truama.
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Roses are red.

    Violets are blue.

    In Soviet Russia.

    Poem write YOU!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    It's really sad but if that's your decision, you can't really change love once you fall for it again right?

    Answer my poem please? I posted it yesterday but until now only one person answered it. it's not fair that other questions get more than one answer.

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=ApYAc...

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Roses are red.

    Violets are blue.

    In Soviet Russia.

    Poem write YOU!

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