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what do you think of my poem?
crushed love-
why do i fall for some one that doesnt care
why do i want someone who's love isnt there?
i hate myself for liking you
i feel so sad and blue
i want u more then anything
you only like me as a friend
and i feel so heart broken
these tears never seem to end
as my love continues to go unspoken
i hate having this feeling
of being inlove
of wanting to be your only one
if only you could see how badly i want it
u dont understand how much i love you
if only u knew
if u only knew how much
that i'd do anything for your touch
i wish i never felt this way
then i would be okay
i cry all night wishing you felt the same
why does this love cause such pain?
tears stream down my face
i feel like going insane
knowing that where not together
wanting to be with u forever
its just a pain that overwhelms me
im just so frustrated and angry
i hate falling in love
being in pain is not what i call fun
why do we have to fall in love?
to go from floating in the clouds above
to being crushed like a soda can
to go from being warmed by the sun
to becoming bitter cold by that someone
this love is tearin up my heart
i cant take it anymore of this
longing to have your kiss
i need to stop before i go crazy
well no more tears am i going to shed
no more heartache and no more dread
im going to lock away my heart
and toss the key very far
if i keep my heart closed then i wont get hurt
better to be safe then to get burned
no more worrying about love
i had enough
love is a stupid lie
im just going to say goodbye
to all my silly dreams
i guess its just not meant to be
im never going to find a soul mate
im sick of having to wait
for something that will never come
there isnt such thing as true love
im not going to look anymore
no more love i say as i close the door
love sucks
and i had enough
6 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
This is a great poem. I know pretty much everyone has felt this way about someone at least once in their lifetime. You put it into the perfect words.
- AlbertaLv 45 years ago
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It doesn't necessarily have to rhyme but it needs to hit my emotions. I think clarity of expression is important as well. I don't like to second guess what I'm reading about. I always look for what I term "poetic gems"in the text.
- 1 decade ago
My motto is seek and ye shall find. If you give up on love you will be cheatingg yourself out of a lifetime of wonder. Each individuall is a universe of exciting possibilities. Dig deep in the cracker jack box you will find a prize.
Source(s): I have loved well and deeply-it sometimes was painful but well worth the truama. - Anonymous1 decade ago
Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
In Soviet Russia.
Poem write YOU!
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
It's really sad but if that's your decision, you can't really change love once you fall for it again right?
Answer my poem please? I posted it yesterday but until now only one person answered it. it's not fair that other questions get more than one answer.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
In Soviet Russia.
Poem write YOU!