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After reading the case of David, I focus on David’s behaviors rather than his parent. I believed that by solving David’s behaviors; it will also help the parent overcome their problems. I realized that it is a normal behavior to feel withdrawn by losing a leg. But, David automatically became sullen and withdrawn knowing his diagnosis and continues his behavior in a period time of four months. Being an adopted child, David was not able to enact on his situation in a positive and successful manner due to his early childhood experiences. Another reason that I decide that object relations theory related to David’s situation because of poor relationship with his adopted parent and the lack of communication between David and his parent.

As a final note, object relations theory is a very useful theory to overcome issues like David. Family and individual therapy is good way to establish an excited communication between David and his parent. I believed that David’s parents are able to care for David and his way of living with his disability. By using object relations theory, David and his parent will overcome their obstacles and become a better effective family.