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Fug-azi asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Solitude Of A Shade - Critique Requested?

~Solitude Of A Shade~

She slipped like a breeze

below a threshold,

just a shiver upon chandeliers

hung in forbidding halls,

hoping the prisms

wouldn’t refract her paleness,

or blind her with company.

She could exist on a sigh

wrapped in self pity

and never miss the colours

of her dreams,

so long as ice remained opaque.

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  • Tony h
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    Lovely - 9 1/2 out of 10; can't give you 10 because that's perfection of which we mortals are not capable.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Loved it, all of it.

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