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Critique my artwork...?

Hey, there are things I wish I had done differently in all of these, but I want to know what you guys think... and uhh yeah, oh and btw I was wondering if any TH fans recognize th background in the second one... ( :

http://velisica.deviantart.com/art/George-14041180...

http://velisica.deviantart.com/art/Uber-den-Dacher...

http://velisica.deviantart.com/art/Der-Vergiften-A...

http://velisica.deviantart.com/art/Kampf-Der-Liebe...

btw click on it, it get's bigger, and looks better that way.

Update:

- ιитєиsє - JαиєDσє. yep, that's right. I wanted to do more definition on the under side of the arms, a little more shadow, but yeah I like the buildings... thanks!

Update 2:

yeah, hands are hard, but I love them so I keep working at it, and yeah I did kind of have to rush them, it is for hihg school art class, and we don't have that much time to do our projects. Thanks!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    They are decent. you have potential, but quite honestly they are nothing special. you really could use some work on hands and perspective. my advice: keep working on it. hands are difficult to draw, so find some hands to draw, over and over from different positions until you get it. sorry to be so blunt, but i tend to be so when critiquing artwork, since i am an artist myself. it doesn't help you improve if i just say "zomg you rock!" i want you to improve, so i give you honest advice. good luck.

  • 1 decade ago

    Great drawings, it looks like you are rushing them a bit some of the mark making is a wee bit sloppy and i think the work suffers for it but if you take a more time with that it would be really great.

    Source(s): Just my suggestion!
  • 1 decade ago

    Just to remind you to vote for th

    http://nrjmusicawards.nrj.fr/votes-3373/votecatego...

    very important since th gonna attend, unlimited

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    not very matter, but th gotta win, 50times a day…they lose bigtime with another group…

  • Honestly, your drawings are amazing

    & I love what you name them! ^_^

    ohh and the background in the second picture's from the

    beginning of the Ready,Set,Go/Übers Ende der Welt video, right? xD

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