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I'm having trouble writing for my metal band. Please help?
This song is about "the adder" and I need to insead of just using things I know about the actual snake, i also need things that may make it kindof fantasy oriented, butt when I try to think of anything more, it dies. Here are my lyrics so far:
The Adder
Those who loathe those brothers with scales and fangs
Watch your actions with caution
For he strikes those who would smite him
His glory in one shining scale worth more than all of your gold!
The adder waits for destiny
His watchful eye never blinking
He sees a weakness, then he strikes
His mouth is death to all ?????
I don't need helpp revising, I just need to finish writng it, I would appreciate any phrases, words, verses, ideas, etc you think might it into the song. If I use any of your material, you will be thanked in our CD booklet, with credit for helping me with this song.
2 Answers
- JonathanLv 61 decade agoFavorite Answer
Those are some really good lyrics!
Here's some suggestions:
1. Try giving it a fantasy/swords-and-sorcery element without making it too Spinal Tap-cheesy.
2. Who is the adder after? What kind of people/creatures are his enemies? Describe them. Why are they his opponents? Do his opponents have a history of prosecuting him you could incorporate into the lyrics without making it too lengthy?
Hope that helps!
Source(s): Writer/avid reader. - ?Lv 45 years ago
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