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New poem, what do you think?
In-Between
How nice it is to see you
In this place between the tide and times.
All the things I wanted to say…
Instead, I will just smile.
I wonder if you ever
Had any feelings of regret?
How sad that you became
A stranger
The moment that you left.
And now we have become
Two unfamiliar visitors
In this transient place.
We pass each other
In the silence,
Till again we wake.
In the past where they have fallen
A thousand beautiful things...
Yet, sometimes I still see
That familiar stranger
Passing in my dreams.
7 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
outstanding one thing id change but its ur masterpiece just constructive critism but change that one line to.......in the silence till again we awake
- 1 decade ago
Hmm... Pretty solid work, I believe it to be pretty good... Deep in meaning, a good flow, nice rhyme. Good job.
My eyes bulge,
With a knowledge previously unknown.
My brain shuts down,
This poem has gotten me: Mind Blown.
(Srry for the cheesy rhyme, I just can't help myself...)
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