Do you like this poem? :D?

Every day and night,

Through thick and thin,

Feeling like i lost, couldn’t win,

Then you came along and made things right,

Making my future, seem big and bright.

Now i enjoy life and feel really fine,

You truly are my sunshine.

Broken hearts, broken dreams,

They’re just some things that love brings.

Whenever you learn that it’s all a lie, you’ll cry.

Sure, it could be a bIg mistake;

Just learn from it, for your own sake.

You find out nothing hurts like love,

Nothing brings your heart so much pain.

So sick and tired, just wanna’ get out of this game.

You added flame to this game,

When I met you, When you came.

From that point on, in any case;

It will never be the same, nothing can ever replace.

What you made out of me, What I became.

I didn't write this by myself. I wrote this with -that special someone- in 8th grade. (she wrote most of it!) i just wanted to share it. :)

you can critique/comment if you want~ you might get ten points! x) (though i don't think you should care for meaningless points)

the poems that i've posted earlier, i'd be happy if you critiqued those though! :) or at least read themm ^^

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