is this song like, really spiritual or just cheese? (I wrote it myself by the way)?

Its gonna be 25% of my grade in music, so i need it not to be cheesy. Please tell me what you think of the lyrics

Verse 1

You took the cross from my hands

You walked alone through lonely lands

With nothing but a crown of thorns

And the tears upon your face

You know the point you know the reason

For why I have ever been

And with your death upon the cross you

Cleansed me of my sin

Chorus1

Oh Jesus, yeah you saved my soul

You taught me how to love

Treat the world as my brother

Not just like any other

You saved my soul

Made me see the light

Beyond this world

Shining ever so brightly

Verse 2

(havent got one yet, but i'm working on it)

Chorus1

Oh and you saved my soul

You taught me to love my neighbour

Treat the world as my brother

Not just like any other

You saved my soul

Made me see the light

Beyond this world

Shining so bright

Bridge

Jesus Glory

To the king

To the king

How glorious is he(x2)

Chorus

Oh and you saved my soul

When I was down and out

When I suffered doubt

Lost in translation

You saved my soul

Sent me a sign

When I was blind

And needed your loving guidance

End

Jesus when my heart bleeds

You’re all I need

Jesus you’re all I need

And when I’m suffering

In a desert of despair

I know you’ll be there

I know

(CHORUS x4, on last one get quieter and more strung out)