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Relations
It’s a world of give and take
A cost, a risk
A heart to break
When everything’s at stake
Who will take the fall
And risk it all
Who will be the first
To thirst
To have an open heart
Reveal emotion there
And in turn given only despair
If loves a losing game
A pathetic dying flame
Why do we believe it so
Maybe we should just let go
Is it beauty that we weave
Or time spent trying to deceive
If you only want to win
Then loving was my sin
When tears are the constant price we pay
There has to be a better way.
2 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Amazing Poem. Very deep. I liked it, you will go far :) You focused on a deep matter, that people don't usually think about, but after reading your poem, the feeling of changing the world revived in me :) Keep it up!
