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Spiffs C.O. asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

New Poem, please critique?

Healing

Everyone’s looking

For something to be

A love that is lasting

Is caring and real

And I spent so much time

Blaming the world

For its shadows and losses

And those who were cruel

And I felt that I always

Had to be so much more

faultless and flawless

With fans to adore

It took some time to realize

I was already whole.

If your seeking perfection

You won’t find it in me

I’m flawed and I’m human

These scars you can see

But I am no less than the others out there

The journey to beauty

Is not in what you wear

Its not in what you see

But who you are and are trying to be

The essence of beauty

I found it in me.

We are broken and wounded

But loving and free

Not perfect, but trying

And that’s the meaning

Of true self esteem.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Ooohh.. Nice! I like it so much..

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