More Hostage Negotiations. Comments/Critiques?

A few days ago I saw an answer by someone posting under your name that read:

"What poetry is today is a romantic delusional tradition carried on by adolescent girls and naive and vainglorious adults. It is a dead field carried on by hobbyists."

At the time I guessed only some emo teen without a clue could be so dumb.

Oh boy, right again.

Now dont you play those reindeer games with her.

Just flush that baby down the drain,

Oh she’s become stale and ugly;

It’s a new day, now see that train?

Hop on it, it won’t be easy.

Or run as far as you can go

From all those 27 years;

Stop googling her to say hello,

Nor attempt to revive arrears.

I’m no plumber but I’m quite sure

She’s in the pipes, so drop the spade

I’m no doctor but here’s a cure

It’s called moving on, let it fade.

You’ve come a long way with new friends

Who truly care and comprehend.

Regardless the why, have seen you lash out

a number of times, but never without

the curiously benign effect

that no one feels the lash within this locus!

You aim exclusively for some unfocused focus

of your auspicious malicious intent

so you just go on bein' a malcontent.

It's okay wit' ever'one here, I strongly suspect!

Ouch

I like how the build up punctuates the conclusion.

And the contradiction created by that conclusion.

Obviously there is still some resentment lingering here, so the idea that I hope you are doing well really means I hope that you have decided to improve your character defects.

Ever so often it is good to revisit the land of misfit toys.

'Denying the viciousness under the desire to make peace would not serve my recovery.'

that is another quote fit for our society today. love it

:(

I want to cry for you here

or wipe at a tear

closing a door

will help for sure

but think about who you are

not a drunk at a bar

but a man of strength and reserve

and a crapload of nerve

well cry until it's fine

and drop me a line

Nice write and i hope you learned your lesson. Hey love is a dime a dozen so dont let this get you down.

This 'email' is more appropriate

for Yahoo's 'relationship' category -

in question-form of course.

With a massive over-haul,

perhaps ?

with a third-person he/she lead

and body,

a first-person volta

and third-person twist in finale

your 'story' could be poetic.

Feelings 'touched' are too

often told.

Feelings brushed

are painted.

.

HH, hahahah, here I am, trying to scatter Light around this morning,

and come upon this......"I wish you well." And I think, bless his little pea pickin' heart!!!

Then....."I hoped this email could maybe ruin your day though."

hahahahha

Well, NO ONE can say you hide your truth....and while at times you KNOW you drive me crazy,

you also know I have often stated, your honestly knows no bounds.

Con artists do that, HH. We've all been conned ot of money or things or...Love. Good riddance to the sloot.