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Spiffs C.O. asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

New poem, what do you think?

Give and Take

I won’t compromise

My integrity

Listen to your

Empty words and

Voided dreams

All that we lost

Found in between

The ends can’t justify

The means

Those beautiful lies

From half hearted innocent eyes

Eyes that I despise

And gorgeous tainted lips

Burning with a deadly kiss

My giving becomes tired

I will no longer

Feed that fire

Let’s get off this tedious ride

Its demons

I cannot abide

Inability to decide

It’s your heart you hide.

Though you never found mine.

I won’t change myself

To suit your desires

Or be sucked into the

Insecurity mire.

Gaining wisdom from these mistakes

A broken heart

And that’s ok

This is how the heart is made

Whole

This unseemly gift is what it takes

To make the spirit

Grow

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I love this poem!! You have GREAT flow and I like your style of writing. This is great material here.... I feel it could be published if it's not already... fabulous poem :D

    Source(s): I'm a writer myself
  • 1 decade ago

    the poem, so orderly and neat

    with many feelings going by

    like the hurricane of your mind

    the expression, the pain, and the determination,

    intertwined as one

    to make it thine own

    then the poor me's of my life

    explore, dream, devour

    the words of the wise

    and live to tell the story...

    I LOVE IT :)

    thanks for sharinggg

  • 1 decade ago

    I can't say I enjoyed the variation in how it's formatted, but certainly absorbed the offering. Thank you to share it.

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