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New poem, what do you think?
Give and Take
I won’t compromise
My integrity
Listen to your
Empty words and
Voided dreams
All that we lost
Found in between
The ends can’t justify
The means
Those beautiful lies
From half hearted innocent eyes
Eyes that I despise
And gorgeous tainted lips
Burning with a deadly kiss
My giving becomes tired
I will no longer
Feed that fire
Let’s get off this tedious ride
Its demons
I cannot abide
Inability to decide
It’s your heart you hide.
Though you never found mine.
I won’t change myself
To suit your desires
Or be sucked into the
Insecurity mire.
Gaining wisdom from these mistakes
A broken heart
And that’s ok
This is how the heart is made
Whole
This unseemly gift is what it takes
To make the spirit
Grow
3 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
I love this poem!! You have GREAT flow and I like your style of writing. This is great material here.... I feel it could be published if it's not already... fabulous poem :D
Source(s): I'm a writer myself - 1 decade ago
the poem, so orderly and neat
with many feelings going by
like the hurricane of your mind
the expression, the pain, and the determination,
intertwined as one
to make it thine own
then the poor me's of my life
explore, dream, devour
the words of the wise
and live to tell the story...
I LOVE IT :)
thanks for sharinggg
- 1 decade ago
I can't say I enjoyed the variation in how it's formatted, but certainly absorbed the offering. Thank you to share it.