Rate my poem pls., i wanna know what you guys think?

Here i am on my bed,

as tears my face shed,

for i am lonely,

and i yearn to be happy,

and in my heart a space i carry,

for the one that i will fancy.

It is my will,

even till' that universal hourglass refills,

to look for the one,

that i will want,

for the one i will yearn,

maybe then she will learn,

i love her,

and will always be my lover.

Guys/ Girls, please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism welcomed, just throw everything at me.