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Oh, those deep dark pits,

round and black, they entice,

a glance into them and i fall to bits,

telling a story of danger and dangerous vice.

Blink away, blink away,

there, my soul does not wisho to stay,

look astray, look astray,

keeping bitterness, sadness and pain at bay....

Inflictor, remembrancer are the dark dark brown orbs,

pulled into them in times past,

then quickly, painfully, fast....

thrown back out just like times past.

I loved, and seduced by them is true fact,

not looking, even a glance...fruitless act,

you still bring it all back,

and as if it were wonderful,

you bring them back by the sackful.

It hurts, it hurts, to thinkof them,

you have done much healing, but more pain,

sometimes, it feels like a crippling poison,

those are the times, i try to keep myself sane...

A poem written during the depths of sadness that come and go....

Anyway, give it a read. I know it's not all that great, but emotion is a hard thing to phase. Espacially when you want it to sound nice...Critique please...

Oh how your beauty cuts,

how your voice en-trembles,

longing for you tortures,

and your rare touches sweet.

Thoughts of you fill the cavity in me with bliss,

but the things to come fill it with a sadness,

how i wish for your caress,

but yet, fear it for the pain it can bear.

To run, or not to run,

from this sweet honey-like nightmare,

for you are the beauty of the sun,

yet the danger of a snare.

there, tell me what you think. DON'T EVEN THINK OF HOLDING BACK THE CRITICISM. please don't hold back. And try to give me a title please, i can't seem to make one up that fits.

Visions of you enchant the night sky of my mind,

the veils of white clouds, tonight, remind me of your hair so soft and flowing,

the stars, much like glimmer in those eyes enchanting,

and the wind, chiming, humming, remembrancer of your voice.

Longing for her company under this sky,

i wonder with distance at the woman,

who, with secrecy to the full i spy,

yet not knowing to the full, as to why.

There goes again the wind, the remembrancer,

the fan to the flames, as i fly into the the hands of yearning,

so captivating the shine of stars, the glimmer,

tightly holding me, the hands of yearning keeping me still in fantasy.

Oh, the moon, to the brim with thoughts and visions,

in my mind, it is you,

to comfort me in troubles, to sprinkle me with dew,

to cradle me, when cradling you.

Now, to the flower beds i fly,

the flowers red, maroon, pink, and blue,

each natural beauty, a thought of you,

tilting to the right, i breath, and sigh.

The greens of the forest, the strong, the vivid,

the things here, all alive, all livid,

because that's what you are in my mind,

real, graspable, languid.

This is what you have done,

the blue frozen forest now blooming,

the flower beds, once desert dune,

so disappears the howl of owls, replaced with birds of singing.

We were fine all happy and stuff but we weren't together. She always looked at me in class and stuff, talked to me all the time, so i decided to tell her how i felt about her. And after i did that, she just suddenly gave me the cold shoulder...always acting like i never existed and avoiding to talk to me but then again she continues to stare at me in class. Man, i don't know what to do....and i really like her too.. If you can, please tell me what's happening and if there's hope just tell me what i'm supposed to do. PLEASE!!

Every look cuts my soul,

every thought a stake through my heart,

every touch a burning of my soul,e

very embrace just a thought.

Every thought of you,

just memoirs of what could be,

to me you'll remain as fresh dew,

always will remain in me a love for you.

Even though another is in your heart,

you've been in mine from the start,

silently you stay in my heart,

like a vine planted in my heart.

Your voice,

like a sunset in the rain,

all the sadness and joy,

all i push away in vain.

For the sadness conquers,

And my soul it sears,

as memories of you,

flood my tortured heart.

With sorrow it fights a never-ending war,

for it craves it's freedom,

gained with the presence of love,

but it's gone, leaving only it's glove.

Never ending it will be,

and never winning it's commander foresees,

always sorrowful it will be,

and always a storm in the sea.

i just wanna see what the response is from you guys. I'm an amateur by the way. Started writing a month back.

In the dark of night,

I look up in the sky,

in amazement i sigh,

light illuminates the night sky,

as knowledge, the path of truth.

Beauty illuminates the night sky,

as the gates of my heart,

wide as the sky, part,

to let it in.

Wonder illuminates the night sky,

i breathe it in,

savoring, enjoying, in wonder,

I look up in the night sky,

again, i sigh.

Please tell me what you think. I really need to know.Just started like for a week and a little bit more,

but don't hold back any criticism, throw it all here.

As I sit by a table,

i wonder,

how to write my feelings out,

how to get the rocks off my back,

and the stones of my chest,

that feel as if they are pulling me,

deeper and deeper still,

into the waters of sorrow and loneliness,

how, how, how, how,

i wonder, i wonder.

i know this might suck, because i just started writing this week...but i wanna know what you guys think of this...please give critique.

Here i am on my bed,

as tears my face shed,

for i am lonely,

and i yearn to be happy,

and in my heart a space i carry,

for the one that i will fancy.

It is my will,

even till' that universal hourglass refills,

to look for the one,

that i will want,

for the one i will yearn,

maybe then she will learn,

i love her,

and will always be my lover.

Guys/ Girls, please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism welcomed, just throw everything at me.

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