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Rate poem please, please give some comments?
As I sit by a table,
i wonder,
how to write my feelings out,
how to get the rocks off my back,
and the stones of my chest,
that feel as if they are pulling me,
deeper and deeper still,
into the waters of sorrow and loneliness,
how, how, how, how,
i wonder, i wonder.
i know this might suck, because i just started writing this week...but i wanna know what you guys think of this...please give critique.
1 Answer
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Any start is a good one.
It's actually very nice.
Read it again in a few days and you may see changes that you might want to make.
Keep writing.