What do you think of my poem?

What gives you the right,

To rob me of my love?

I swear, it doesnt end here.

You do not lie above!

From this moment foreward,

Your heart must be stone.

How could you take her from me,

After all that i have shown?

I would give her the world.

If my strength would let me.

Now it seems the one i love,

Is whom i must set free.

You may have won the battle.

You have not won the war!

My heart may be shattered,

But, our love will not be tore.

You have captured the queen.

But the king is not dead.

I have really lost my mind.

I’ll leave the board painted red.

Painted red with the blood,

and the bodies of your team.

Watch closely for my pawns.

They’re more useful than they seem.

Once they reach your eighth rank.

My queen will again be mine.

We’ll bask in the glory of victory.

Our joyous love shall shine!

No matter how you try,

I promise, you will fail.

Her and i will be together,

Until we’re old and frail.

A humans love cannot be stopped.

It will not go away.

My heart will be within her hands,

Until my dying day.

What gives you the right,

To rob me of my friend?

Take a look at what you’ve done.

You have brought upon your end!

This is dedicated to a horrible woman.

I love you caroline.

Lemme know what you think?=D