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Willeeum
My name is Willeeum, i enjoy to write poetry and to play chess. im the lead vocalist in a posthardcore band and yeah...
What are the vitamins that help hair nails and skin called?
yanno, the kind i can buy from any pharmacy?
2 AnswersMedicine10 years agohey. will you read my poem? i want an honest oppinion.?
This ragdoll is made of cowardice within.
Her stitching strikes fear among men.
With armies on hand, our defenses spread thin.
Her story is heard now and then.
Men’s true fear is the magic she commands.
She has visions of an accurate yearning.
Though fear spreads throughout; our army still stands.
We become stronger through tactics we’re learning.
A dual to death will consume the field underneath.
The placid sky above knows not our intention.
An army of thousands drew their swords from the sheath.
“Orders from leader!” Battle cries snap the tension.
Step after step, their armor rattles like thunder.
Without fear my battalion patiently assesses.
Strategy shows that we can’t afford to blunder.
Our society refuses to clean up our messes.
Crimson soaked sod dotted with corpses;
Lay monument to all we fought to save.
Our survivors ride back on horses.
To recruit and rest before the next wave.
The darkest army of all fell before us today.
We protected something worth more than their cause.
The battle over, with war quickly headed our way.
Serving our cause, we will fight without pause.
The love we have for ourselves and our kind,
Will keep our feet firmly planted; and our hearts free of fear.
This tale of strength will not be left behind.
Songs will be sung in honor of this date for all to hear
-Willeeum McIntosh-
5 AnswersPoetry10 years agoi like poems, you do too. will you read mine?
This ragdoll is made of cowardice within.
Her stitching strikes fear among men.
With armies on hand, our defenses spread thin.
Her story is heard now and then.
Men’s true fear is the magic she commands.
She has visions of an accurate yearning.
Though fear spreads throughout; our army still stands.
We become stronger through tactics we’re learning.
A dual to death will consume the field underneath.
The placid sky above knows not our intention.
An army of thousands drew their swords from the sheath.
“Orders from leader!” Battle cries snap the tension.
Step after step, their armor rattles like thunder.
Without fear my battalion patiently assesses.
Strategy shows that we can’t afford to blunder.
Our society refuses to clean up our messes.
Crimson soaked sod dotted with corpses;
Lay monument to all we fought to save.
Our survivors ride back on horses.
To recruit and rest before the next wave.
The darkest army of all fell before us today.
We protected something worth more than their cause.
The battle over, with war quickly headed our way.
Serving our cause, we will fight without pause.
The love we have for ourselves and our kind,
Will keep our feet firmly planted; and our hearts free of fear.
This tale of strength will not be left behind.
Songs will be sung in honor of this date for all to hear
-Willeeum McIntosh-
2 AnswersBooks & Authors10 years agowhat is a good free rpg to keep me occupied?
i tried playing Evony, but that is just a little TOO time consuming for my taste. any better suggestions?
4 AnswersVideo & Online Games1 decade agoWhat is an orange pill shaped like a xanax bar prescribed as a pain killer starting with the letter n?
i dont have it in front of me so i dont know the size in comparison to an actual xanax bar. my girlfriend was prescribed them and i wanna know what they are.
2 AnswersMedicine1 decade agoDo singers normally not like their own voice?
Cause ive had a handful of people tell me i can sing, but i hate my own voice. i WOULD just put it to the test and have a whole lot of people judge, but im terribly self concious about it.
3 AnswersSinging1 decade agoShare your oppinion on my poetry?
-I Swear That I Am Here-
Being caught redhanded,
Is quite a funny thing.
You’ll notice that i care for you,
Yet i cannot do a thing.
The fact remains; my mind won’t change.
My vow is that I’m certain.
I’ll stand inbetween you and harm,
Deflecting like glare by a curtain.
I have persisted for this long.
Trying my best to keep pace.
Like i said from square one.
“Can we please stop this chase?”
We could join and share pleasure,
By finding a new friend.
Uncovering solace in eachother.
While being loyal ‘til the end.
It seems to me you’re frightened.
I swear there is naught to fear.
My feet are firmly planted.
I swear that i am here.
My sincere promise will be kept.
I would catch your every tear.
I will always be within your grasp.
I swear that i am here.
-Willeeum McIntosh
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWould you give me your oppinion on my poetry please?
-I'm Completely Star-Stricken Over You, Sweetheart.-
-Willeeum McIntosh-
You took me by surprise, and made my head spin ‘round.
When I first hear your voice it’s like I rise off the ground.
We share so many secrets ‘cause we’re almost the same,
I’ll make this promise dear; this is not a game.
I take you very seriously. Your words touch my heart.
That is why I have prepared you this one piece of art.
I worked my very hardest, I hope you believe me.
Come Easter this year it is you who I’ll see.
I’ll bet that I’m struck by a star on that day.
I’ll try and show you my love in every single way.
I predict that I’ll be stuck, frozen to my place.
Just from one quick glance at your angelic face.
I really do think that I will kiss you first.
Because if I didn’t act quickly, I could just burst.
We have so much in common. We keep learning more.
My dear, I swear it is you I adore.
It’s the simple things you do, like making me smile.
Emilie, please trust me; ill wait more than awhile.
You always make me laugh, and make me want to sing.
I have even proposed to you while I lacked a ring.
You agreed to be my bride. I was ecstatic.
I won’t mean to hurt you while I act erratic.
I would take on armies of undead to show you,
I will always be here; no matter what you go through.
My attachment latched on, my heart’s in distress.
Only because of the distance; please be my princess?
I would love to treat you that way, the way you deserve.
‘Cause you give me butterflies, and take away my nerve.
We laugh and we joke like we are best friends.
I sincerely hope that this love never ends.
When the time has come, and we are together;
We will both say, “better late than never”.
You came out of the woodwork. You made me see,
That you are the angel whom I must set free.
Ill set you free from the doubt, and heartache run rampant.
All these fears that you have, they will all remain absent.
So long as I’m around, ill protect your life with mine.
In the times when its peaceful, they’ll be blinded by shine.
The shine from the connection that we formed so quickly.
If our love was a plant, it would be all but prickly.
1 AnswerPoetry1 decade agoLet me know what you think of my poem please?
With 100 sets of spears and Shields.
Delving deeper, until resistance yields.
Tearing our way through the hills and the fields.
With our army, we will spill your blood.
Storming the village, spreading their fear.
Bearing axes, and torches; much to revere.
Your family's screams are the last sound to hear.
Like we're Vikings, we will lay you to waste.
Plaguing the lands with blood-lust and hate.
The loss and despair is our force to dictate.
Rebellion will rise, but it forms too late.
We are coming in hundreds, sealing your fate.
Like the sharks are drawn to blood,
We're drawn to where hatred will flood.
We quell the rampage, victory is ours.
Enslaving the thousands, the empire towers.
We have taken these lands in our lord's good name.
Your previous monarch now writhes while aflame.
An ignorant country, you carry the blame.
With our army, we will spill your blood.
The endless sky stained black with despair.
While the heavens boil, and make all aware.
For all of your crimes and mis-deeds, this fate is fair.
Like we're Vikings, we will lay you to waste.
-Willeeum McIntosh-
i do not have a title yet. any suggestions?
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoI would really like an oppinion on my poetry. help me out please? be honest. thanks=)?
-Like A Dragon's Fire-
-Willeeum McIntosh-
Like a dragon’s fire our love it breathes.
That we’re made for each other is what I believe.
To have come this far, and surrender now?
We’re standing as strong as the world will allow.
With a spring in our step, and a song in our mind.
We travel through troubles with our hearts combined.
Our fingers interlocked, our sights set ahead.
Along this perilous path that we tread.
Like a dragon’s fire, our love it shines.
From the fusion of both of our hearts and our minds.
The glow sheds a light on the road in the distance.
We have proven our love in more than this instance.
Our fight through this pain and this distress should prove,
This connection, our bond; can only improve.
We refuse to give in, or take a step towards retreat.
It is our burning shine that makes us complete.
Like a dragon’s fire, our love it burns.
It warms us like sunlight, and destroys our concerns.
Please, come with me; I hope you’re not seasick.
Using warmth from our love, we will sail the arctic.
This passion inside us, is the source of the flame.
Kept burning by the vows of true love we proclaim.
Wishing I could have wiped every last one of your tears.
I will catch every tear as we cross new frontiers.
Like a dragon’s fire, our love will spread.
Leaving all anger smothered by great joy instead.
These effects have no limits, blessing many a thought.
Bringing our widest smiles, what most men have sought.
One day they’ll know, that our hearts beat as one.
Our hearts tell the tale of all the battles we’ve won.
Never losing hope, struggling until we’re forsaken.
Fighting against these rules, while our laws awaken.
Like a dragon’s fire, our love it protects;
Us from ourselves, and the harm it deflects.
We have conquered our troubles, our time has come.
Even as frost engulfs us, love is in blossom.
4 AnswersPoetry1 decade agowhy wont tumblr let me post stuff?
i go to post something in a text format, and i title it, write the text, tag it, then finally i hit post. i look to see what it looks like and only the title shows up, nothing in the actual post and its all that typing wasted everysingle time. can anyone tell me how to fix this? also if it helps, ive tried to copy and paste what i would like to post as well as typing it all out. please help:(
2 AnswersMySpace1 decade agoLemme know what you think of my poem?
I’ve never felt this way before,
I need someone to Please help me.
I really crave an intervention,
But no, her name’s not Chelsea.
Her name is Caroline,
and she really drives me crazy.
I can see the love with share,
With my vision all but hazy.
I wish that i could tell her,
How much i truly care.
Or how much love is left unseen,
But quite honestly it’s there.
She is seriously amazing,
She is all i need and more.
She’s more beautiful than a sunset,
And, She’s all i can adore.
She is the only girl i see,
And, The only girl worth seeing.
I should’ve fought more early on,
But, Instead i kept on fleeing.
Away from all my fears,
And, even further from her heart.
‘Til finally it fell together,
Into a marvelous peice of art.
After such a long while,
She discovered her affection.
This made me oh so happy,
We are a picture of perfection.
With such love between us two,
We’re like a scene right from a movie.
I am nothing without my angel,
‘Cause she’s really quite a doozy.
She’s always caught my eye,
With her overwhelming beauty.
You may not quite believe me,
But really i speak so truly.
She bares a perfect smile,
Between such placid lips.
Her eyes are quite a sight,
And, Her figure could sink ships.
By distracting the captain,
As he watched her every stride.
I have so much love for her,
That i cannot keep inside.
I want to shout from the rooftops,
A confessional of my feelings.
I want to scream how much i love her.
From a spot, higher than the ceilings.
She is my one and only,
The single girl i love.
I wish her only pleasant,
Things to ever speak of.
She is the owner of my heart,
And, the girl that makes me glad.
She always leaves me breathless,
I’d never try to make her sad.
She is all that really matters,
She is all I’ll ever need.
Our love is like a tree,
That blossomed from a seed
1 AnswerPoetry1 decade agoNow here is another poem. lemme know what you think?=)?
The day she turns eighteen,
You’ll see my smile spread.
My thoughts will seem to be out loud,
Yet they remain unsaid.
My breath will be absent.
I’ll be capable of just one action.
Bringing her heart so close to mine,
To satisfy the attraction.
Our lips will slowly come together.
Soon sparks will be ignited.
All the sorrows will wash away.
The wrongs will then be righted.
I’ll place her left wrist in my hand,
To hold my promise complete.
“I’ll be back for this one day.”
Once again, our lips will meet.
My love will overwhelm me.
My heart will then be healed.
I will not let harm befall her.
My existance is her shield.
So long as i am breathing,
And, my heart’s still beating.
I’ll do anything to keep her safe.
There will be no retreating.
I need to be her protection.
Her suited, shining knight.
I would cast my life into the flames.
To ensure she is alright.
I will stand my ground.
I will wait here forever.
So long as her hand’s in mine.
Its better late than never.
1 AnswerPoetry1 decade agoWhat do you think of my poem?
When we’re faced with troubles,
I hope she is not scared.
‘Cause as long as her hand’s in mine,
I know we are prepared.
Anything that’s thrown our way
We will persevere.
When times get tough, and things go bad,
Please know I will stay near.
Our love will be untainted,
Throughout every passing year.
Regardless of the challenges,
Remember I’ll be here.
She is the one worth fighting for,
She’s worth every single tear.
If they try to take her from me,
I’ll pursue her without fear.
Our love warms me,
Like a sunlit afternoon.
I’ll never stop this struggle,
Throughout every passing moon.
‘Cause our love is what I’ve longed for,
Please try not to forget.
I’d break through all the clouded skies,
For this amazing girl I’ve met.
Her smile paints a picture,
That is worth a thousand words.
Together we can fly away,
And be surrounded by the birds.
As I’ve said a hundred times,
I’ve given her my heart.
And I know deep inside my mind,
We will never be apart.
Nothing can take me from her,
I’ll be here ‘til the end.
All these girls don’t even try,
‘Cause they know they can’t contend.
She is my one and only,
Truly my dearest friend.
I hope she knows without a doubt,
That I’ll be here ‘til the end.
3 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoLemme know what you think of my poem?
My screams sever the silence,
They fall upon deaf ears.
No one comes to help me.
You’re the only one that hears.
You hurried to my rescue.
Then drug me out of the hole.
The hole i dug for three whole years.
I nearly lost my soul.
Until you came to save me.
You sparked my life anew.
So, now i send my thanks,
For all that you’ve gone through.
Something greater than compassion,
That is what you showed me.
Not only in words, but also actions.
You calmed me down and let me see.
You brought about new meaning,
To a life that was forsaken.
I thought you’d never come to me.
But, alas i was mistaken.
Now i show my gratitude.
For all that you have done.
You made me smile once again.
Then made our two hearts one.
This is dedicated to a wonderful girl, her name is caroline o'connor. she saved me from a life of drugs and crime. as the poem states. she drug me out of my hole. i hope you guys take the time to read this. please, let me know what you think. all i ask is an opinion
4 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWhat happens when you get to level 30 on nacht der untoten?
on call of duty world at war of course. do you really get microsoft points for makign it that far?
5 AnswersVideo & Online Games1 decade agoWhat do you think of my poem?
“Our Misfortune”
Through our steps mistaken,
And, structures now shaken.
My Heart is still with you.
After our endless fights.
Through our sleepless nights.
My heart will stay with you.
From days filled with sorrow,
And, us feeling hollow.
I always will stay true.
With an amorous feeling.
My shell is still peeling.
My heart remains with you.
For so many reasons,
Discovered through seasons.
I always will stay true.
I love you so much,
It acts as a crutch.
And, helps me to get through.
All the fights that we’ve had.
All the days, good or bad.
My heart is still with you.
Our bond is so strong.
I hope it lasts long.
I always will love you.
I’ll pick you up when you’re down.
I’ll remove your every frown.
I am alive because of you.
My love is like a strand.
Stretching from mountains to sand.
It will always follow you.
No matter where you go.
Regardless of who you know.
My love will follow you.
From the beginning, ‘til end,
You will stay my bestfriend.
I swear i will stay true.
Now together we stand here,
Facing the world without fear.
My love belongs to you.
To hold and to cherish.
To know it won’t perish.
My heart belongs to you.
To nurture and to hold.
To still have when we’re old.
I gladly belong to you.
You’re the only girl that matters.
My heart instantly shatters,
When there’s nothing i can do.
Nothing to lift your spirit.
Even if you dont want to hear it.
I will always be here for you.
You can read more of my poetry at Myspace.com.rivalknight
this is just one stanza by the way, i cant fit the entire poem, its extremely long.
3 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWhat do you think of my poem?
What gives you the right,
To rob me of my love?
I swear, it doesnt end here.
You do not lie above!
From this moment foreward,
Your heart must be stone.
How could you take her from me,
After all that i have shown?
I would give her the world.
If my strength would let me.
Now it seems the one i love,
Is whom i must set free.
You may have won the battle.
You have not won the war!
My heart may be shattered,
But, our love will not be tore.
You have captured the queen.
But the king is not dead.
I have really lost my mind.
I’ll leave the board painted red.
Painted red with the blood,
and the bodies of your team.
Watch closely for my pawns.
They’re more useful than they seem.
Once they reach your eighth rank.
My queen will again be mine.
We’ll bask in the glory of victory.
Our joyous love shall shine!
No matter how you try,
I promise, you will fail.
Her and i will be together,
Until we’re old and frail.
A humans love cannot be stopped.
It will not go away.
My heart will be within her hands,
Until my dying day.
What gives you the right,
To rob me of my friend?
Take a look at what you’ve done.
You have brought upon your end!
This is dedicated to a horrible woman.
I love you caroline.
Lemme know what you think?=D
3 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago