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-I Swear That I Am Here-

Being caught redhanded,

Is quite a funny thing.

You’ll notice that i care for you,

Yet i cannot do a thing.

The fact remains; my mind won’t change.

My vow is that I’m certain.

I’ll stand inbetween you and harm,

Deflecting like glare by a curtain.

I have persisted for this long.

Trying my best to keep pace.

Like i said from square one.

“Can we please stop this chase?”

We could join and share pleasure,

By finding a new friend.

Uncovering solace in eachother.

While being loyal ‘til the end.

It seems to me you’re frightened.

I swear there is naught to fear.

My feet are firmly planted.

I swear that i am here.

My sincere promise will be kept.

I would catch your every tear.

I will always be within your grasp.

I swear that i am here.

-Willeeum McIntosh